“Hey Lady! Your’e Going the Wrong Way!” Part 1
This morning on the train on your way to work, maybe you noticed a middle-aged, fairly attractive women. There was nothing particularly interesting about her, so you continued playing with your phone. You would have had no way of knowing just by looking at her how very unusual her journey really was. Dressed in sportswear, tennis shoes, you may have thought she was on her way to the gym but really, her gym is in the opposite direction. Maybe this early morning train ride is anything but banal to her. Perhaps she is about to betray a loved one. She does not look like a traitor.
In French, there is an expression, “Le vengeance est un plat qui se mange froid.” Revenge is a dish that is eaten cold. Are these words ringing in her ears, floating around in her silly head? The image of a plate full of cigarette butts comes to mind. Yet it is not revenge that fuels her. Not even anger. She would have an easier time doing this if she felt hatred or anger but she feels none of this. She knows all to well that dishonesty is not her strong point. She often thinks that if she had a child, lying might be the first act that she would teach him. It is so useful. Necessary. “If you cannot lie in this cold world, you are going to have a hard time,” that is what she would tell her kid.
She cannot lie well. She can, however, omit. or at least she has been capable of omission in the past. For the most part, she needs to reveal herself completely to every person she comes in contact with. She does not seem conscious of how all the information she divulges is a danger to her. Or maybe she just does not care. Discretion is nearly impossible for her, but she has made the decision today to take actions that she will have to hide. She probably finds this unfortunate but she knows that to change her situation, she has to act. She is aware that she is probably making a huge mistake, that she has no armor to shield her from the consequences she may be provoking, but she is letting Fate be her judge.
I hope that luck, fate and the rail timetable will be kind to this attractive woman in her uncertain quest.
And it really is quite uncertain. Thanks!
Bisous,
Dawn
I note it is part one. I await the rest with fascination.
That may not really happen…I just like to leave the door ajar. I am afraid of the dark. 🙂
Bisous,
Dawn
I am not. So that is the night sorted
Smiles
Oh good! 🙂
I trust Fate will make the right decision.
This is nice, not too intense but there is intensity indeed. I hope you are not too afraid of the dark, Fate is leading you to explore it.
On my email, my signature electronic is, “If fate does not make you laugh then you just don’t get the joke.” Which I don’t. Get the joke I mean. I trust fate though. You can never really fight it…so you might as well go along with it.
I was hoping for a more intense Part II. Luckily I have a good imagination. 🙂
Bisous,
Dawn
Yes you do and I can’t wait! I love that electronic signature!
Thanks! I read it in a book and then forget the title, the author…pretty much everything else but that phrase.
Bises!
Your wonderful writing made me think of one of my favorite quotations.
“Opportunity knocks once, but Temptation leans on the doorknob…”
And whispers sweet nothings, I’d imagine.
Xoxo
(shit! I keep on leaning on the doorknob!) I love sweet nothings.
Biggest Baci,
Dawn
The only things that are not to be said are the ones we wouldn’t want others to know… Good luck miss!
Good point…sometimes I think I need to write in order to make reality feel more real. (maybe I’m just a big perv? Or both?)
Bisous Mr. Blown,
Dawn
Being a perv is good. Well, at least some perversions are 😉
Bisous miss.
“Opportunity knocks…”
Mmmmm! So true.
🙂
This is a very appealing kind of writing, Dawn. Beautiful look into the mind of woman in a certain state of mind, and a reader would love to see more. You care about what this woman will do. Interesting that she talks about lying and omitting, but it’s coming from a place of honesty, or she wouldn’t even be talking about lying–she’d just do it. I’d love to read more of this.
I feel compelled to say, “I love you Théo.” because it’s true. I do that better.
Mille bises,
Dawn
I hope this women gets what she wants – without feeling too guilty. She deserves some of the good stuff! N’est-ce pas?
Eh oui!!! Merci Ma Belle Sophia!
Je t’embrasse,
Dawn
your writing is brilliant; it reminds me of jean rhys; full of energy and with a thick vein of sadness, and a struggle against fate, running through it
literary genius bisous
Oh My Sacha…you make me blush! I’m no genius, Silly!
Thanks for flattering me bisous,
Dawn
you would say that….just like the mad person who says they’re not mad 🙂
x
or the guilty who proclaim their innocence.
xoxox
now you’re getting it….my guilty genius
x
😉
Mysterious indeed!!
Fact is often weirder than fiction, and the contrary!
Bisous You,
Dawn
Dawn, your words make my heart swell. You are indeed a siren. Love, love, love. xoxo
Oh thank you!!!
Love to you too!
You know, only too well, that I might suggest to this woman that she cancel her gym membership and just get ride the train daily.
I should probably not read so much into this, but I will. Bisous.
AM reads between the lines and reels in the big fish! I love sports…
That’s a good thing? Right?
I think so…. (?)
My fingers are crossed.
Thanks for caring one way or the other.
Big Bisous