Mon Ange-VF

Mon Ange

Je voudrais avaler
Tout ce qui est bon en toi,
Ton amour condensé
Dans sa forme la plus pure,
Ton essence même.

Je voudrais sucer
Tout ce qui est dure pour toi,
Tes peurs, déceptions…
Les faire disparaître pour toujours
Entre mes lèvres rouges-vermeille.

Je voudrais lécher
Tes blessures, ta solitude
Comme un petit pansement
Pour ton âme
et la mienne aussi

Ton esclave humble et lointaine.

Je voudrais que tu m’écartes
Jusqu’à l’impossible
Afin de savoir
Ce qui se trouve au fond de moi



  1. Theo Black

    Beautiful, Dawn.
    Je voudrais sucer tout ce qui est dure pour toi, tes peurs, déceptions…
    I remember just enough high school French to know this is an excruciating blend of passion, eroticism, and love.
    Are you considering posting an English translation?

    • pivoine68

      I did! Funny, the photographer likes it better in English. To me it sounds harder in English. I used to want to be a literary translator but I think it must be a really tough job. (probably beat the hell out of “no job”.)

      Take care My Sweetness,

      PS: I feel worried that you are not writing. Are you alright?

  2. Nick

    I’m sure Dawn’s English translation will have far more feeling and passion than Mr Google’s effort ever could, useful though it is. The difference between what the words say and what they mean.

    • pivoine68

      Translation is a weird thing…it makes you realize that if there are not words for a given situation in a given language, that situation does not exist in the later. Did that make sense?

      I like this one better in French.

      Bisous Nick!

  3. Fatal

    Parfait. Je l’adore c’est en français et en anglais aussi. Ton passion est déchaînée. Je compte encore une fois, toutes les voies que je t’adorent.


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