Take Me
Take me
On a boat
On a ferris-wheel
On the couch
On a trip
Take me
Now
Fast
Hard
Deep
Take me
Immediately
Urgently
Wildly
Passionately
Take me
To foreign lands
To a park
To the top
To your house
To strange, unexplored places
To bed
Take me
Like a pro-wrestler
Like a convict who just got out of prison
Like a sailor on leave
Like a sweet poet
Like a romantic lover
Like you know what you’re doing
Like I’m asking you to
Like I’m begging on my knees
Like I’m offering myself to you
Take me
From behind
From underneath
From here
From wherever you feel like
Take me
In my mouth
In my ass
In my empty spaces
In your arms
In your hands
In your mouth
In your heart
Take me
For a ride
For a whore
For someone else
For whatever it’s worth
Take me away.
How about I take you to my heart?
The rest we can work out later.
xxx
That works!
Bises!
Wow! Love this – it’s like a wild ride. Oh, and I’d love to!!!
Thanks H.H.!
Bisous,
moi
Great wordplay. We all need to be taken away sometimes.
Thank you! We do…right now!!!
Impatient Bisous,
Dawn
suis-moi
sur moi
sous moi
soule moi
suck moi
snif moi
sexe moi
shine moi
shit moi
tout ton passé
hors de toi
smile moi
ton avenir
emplis toi
suis-moi
sweat moi
“Sir !” moi
sous moi
sers moi
et pour finir :
sers toi
de moi
viens moi
et deviens toi
Oh! Merci mon ami poète et ange à la fois! J’ai si envie de devenir moi…
Je t’embrasse,
Dawn
Like it!
Thanks! I think now there are even more things I could have included…oh well. Next time.
Bises,
Dawn
Urgent and deliciously hot
*blushing like crazy!
xoxo
Dawn
Smiles
I adore this, sweet Dawn. Amazing and beautiful. I love how you braid in the pedantic with the extraordinary. I want to read this to everyone I know. xx Hy
Ah My Royal Hy-ness, My Sweet Lovely Friend….merci! I hope you really do read it to everyone you know. (I fancy the idea of The T.N. hearing my words, I suspect he would put them to good use!)
Je t’embrasse sur la joue,
Dawn
Reblogged this on A Dissolute Life Means… and commented:
My sweet Dawn is a master of words. Her poetry is, literally, poetry. No hyperbole there.
This is by far one of my favorites of hers (and there are many before this), but today’s offerings struck me right between the eyes.
Enjoy, my friends.
xx
Hy
Je t’aime!
Wouldn’t I just love to …!
(so close and yet so far!)
xoxox AM
Take me / For a ride / For a whore / For someone else
The whole thing is clever and erotic. It sounds like it’s unanimous–we all want to take you all those places, and in all those places.
Bisous Théo!